Unsatisfied

This mash-up brought to you by Trifecta’s very last one-word challenge, followed by Inspiration Monday‘s prompt. Both of which in turn were inspired by The Replacements, of course…

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The heels clicked smugly against hardwood, to satisfy her feeling victorious.

Never deeming a backward glance required – relishing with blind dispassion his devastation over losing her – as such, she never glimpsed the ball-peen rushing towards her head.

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22 thoughts on “Unsatisfied

  1. I like when heels smack smugly, but wow that’s one hell of a headache.
    Just goes to show, you should look back, just once, before you go.

  2. The way you engaged the reader’s senses in this is stellar…I can hear those heels and the subsequent rush of air as the ball-peen flies to hit the target. Excellent!

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