Admittedly, I do seem to be on somewhat of a depressive story line arch lately with these Trifectca Writing Challenges. I promise it’s not nearly as bad as it may seem.

Now, with the prompt being the 5 words that follow the 33, here’s this week’s effort…


The pain ebbs, a fat cat dozing after She’s realized her fill.

Breath seeps.

Light pales.


It’s over?

“Ah, but wasn’t it you who said you wanted to Sleep?”




That wasn’t what I meant.


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