Birthday Wishes

As much as I don’t quite understand them, I love my kids.

Let me step back for a minute, to explain that last comment. You see I don’t really feel as if I understand my kids, simply because they sometimes totally knock me off guard with the ideas floating about in their heads.

Take for instance my daughter. When I recently asked her what she wanted for her birthday, her response was that she hoped I wouldn’t mind “publishing” one of her poems on my blog.

Pretty awesome, right? I mean, don’t get me wrong – she also asked for the latest album from Of Monsters & Men – but I was somewhat taken aback that she would think enough of my endeavors, as to ask that hers could also be included.

Of course I said “no,” but I was just kidding. Cuz I’m a daddy douche like that.

Now, without further ado, and recreated as accurately from the source material as possible, here is what comes from the mind of my beautiful daughter when she puts pen to paper:


• The World After I Am Gone •

Growing up.

A hard experience.

O   b  st  acl  e  s

at every turn.

The swiftly moving

c  u

in the     v              a               s               t

sky, reminder that

the days are

ending and starting

 again. Acting as a clock.

A red sun on the horizon

blazing in my

eyes, aging


The future holds great


if only

the minutes


tick by

so fast.

Tick, tock, tick, tock.

It is my future.

I am older now.

The swiftly moving

c  u 

Still reminding my

elderly body

that everyday and everybody

has a start

and a


Now it is

The world after I

am gone.

I am one with the sky and I watch the

aging people

look up at me,

the swiftly


c  u 

in the     v              a               s               t

sky, reminding

them that
















Happy Birthday, darling

29 thoughts on “Birthday Wishes

  1. Oh my God what a profound poem!!!!!!
    You see, that’s why I love children so much, they are just brilliant! :D :D :D
    Happy birthday to your little one!!!!
    And we’ll done with writing this fantastic poem, what a beautiful vision…
    And of course, a praise for you T, congratulations on your family of writers, you are a most fantastic dad, I said it in the past and I say it again till you believe it, brother!!! :lol: :D

    • Dude, we’re reminded daily to treat her just as that… =)

      I’m kidding – she’s a really good kid, and much like her two brothers, she almost daily impresses the hell out of me.

  2. Hey, T!

    Your daughter’s awesome, but I’m sure you know that. And you’re a great Dad for publishing her work on your blog. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday, and both of you all the very best.

    Take care,


  3. The apple does not fall far from the tree in your family, does it?
    I think I liked the creativity of layout as much as the beautifully worded sentiments.
    Happy birthday to your talented girl.

  4. Holy crow, that’s beautiful – It’s lovely to know that the next generation of poets are being bred as we speak. Happy birthday to your girl, and don’t forget that parenting douchebaggery is a necessity to keep ourselves entertained when the little darlings aren’t being so very darling ;)

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