As much as I don’t quite understand them, I love my kids.
Let me step back for a minute, to explain that last comment. You see I don’t really feel as if I understand my kids, simply because they sometimes totally knock me off guard with the ideas floating about in their heads.
Take for instance my daughter. When I recently asked her what she wanted for her birthday, her response was that she hoped I wouldn’t mind “publishing” one of her poems on my blog.
Pretty awesome, right? I mean, don’t get me wrong – she also asked for the latest album from Of Monsters & Men – but I was somewhat taken aback that she would think enough of my endeavors, as to ask that hers could also be included.
Of course I said “no,” but I was just kidding. Cuz I’m a daddy douche like that.
Now, without further ado, and recreated as accurately from the source material as possible, here is what comes from the mind of my beautiful daughter when she puts pen to paper:
• The World After I Am Gone •
Growing up.
A hard experience.
O b st acl e s
at every turn.
The swiftly moving
sd c u lo
in the v a s t
sky, reminder that
the days are
ending and starting
again. Acting as a clock.
A red sun on the horizon
blazing in my
eyes, aging
me.
The future holds great
possibilities
if only
the minutes
wouldn’t
tick by
so fast.
Tick, tock, tick, tock.
It is my future.
I am older now.
The swiftly moving
sd c u lo
Still reminding my
elderly body
that everyday and everybody
has a start
and a
finish.
Now it is
The world after I
am gone.
I am one with the sky and I watch the
aging people
look up at me,
the swiftly
moving
sd c u lo
in the v a s t
sky, reminding
them that
their
futures
are
close
and
that
everyday
has
an
end.
And
a
new
beginning.
•••
Happy Birthday, darling
This makes my sparkly heart flutter. Happy Birthday to her. And happy fathers day to you t.
Thanks Renee =)
A family of writers :) Congratulations, and happy birthday
Thank you =) Let’s hope she can make a gain from it!
Oh my God what a profound poem!!!!!!
You see, that’s why I love children so much, they are just brilliant! :D :D :D
Happy birthday to your little one!!!!
And we’ll done with writing this fantastic poem, what a beautiful vision…
And of course, a praise for you T, congratulations on your family of writers, you are a most fantastic dad, I said it in the past and I say it again till you believe it, brother!!! :lol: :D
Thank you – I will be sure to let her know what you felt about her poem!
And thank you as well, for your (slightly misguided) take on my parenting as well =)
:lol: noooo, not misguided at all. No better prove than your post. :D
awesome, Happy Birthday to her! treat her like a queen, today…and then everyday after.
Dude, we’re reminded daily to treat her just as that… =)
I’m kidding – she’s a really good kid, and much like her two brothers, she almost daily impresses the hell out of me.
Brilliant!
Give her a really loud and annoying HAPPY BIRTHDAY followed by a ginormous bear like hug from me. :D
Can I scream it right in her ear?
Cool, I’ll scream it right in her ear.
Thanks =)
Happy birthday to your daughter t~ this is a glorious way to celebrate!
Thank you k~!
Glorious, AND inexpensive =)
LOVE! <3
=]
Hey, T!
Your daughter’s awesome, but I’m sure you know that. And you’re a great Dad for publishing her work on your blog. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday, and both of you all the very best.
Take care,
Casey
Yes Casey, I do know that. But it’s really great to hear that from you as well.
Thank you!
Out-of-this-world awesome. Congratulations to dad and Happy Birthday to his little girl.
Thank you so much!
Marvelous poem and post:)
Thank you =]
The apple does not fall far from the tree in your family, does it?
I think I liked the creativity of layout as much as the beautifully worded sentiments.
Happy birthday to your talented girl.
:D
Much thanks! I’d let her know about her proximity to the tree, but I’m none to sure how happy she’d be about that =)
bravo!
Hope she had fun on her birthday. Wow, very poetic gal. I love!
Holy crow, that’s beautiful – It’s lovely to know that the next generation of poets are being bred as we speak. Happy birthday to your girl, and don’t forget that parenting douchebaggery is a necessity to keep ourselves entertained when the little darlings aren’t being so very darling ;)
Amen to that – all of that!
=)
Nice! What a great gift!!
And what a wonderful request for a gift! Thank you =)