175 Words Plus A Sentence

We’re getting a new professor over at Master Class 2013.

In addition, k~ asked me to this week refrain from writing about dead people or people seeing dead people – maybe even try something life-affirming for a change…

These modifications of course, make me nervous. So much so, that – as you probably guessed from today’s title – I totally blew my usually self-imposed 150-word limit.

No worries though, I’m still Times New Roman, double spaced and one inch margined, all ’round.

So, understanding that this week’s twist is fitting the prompt sentence somewhere within the body of the text (versus being at the beginning or the end) below is week six’s submission for Master Class 2013:

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Seeing her smile, he felt like a safe cracker who – partly by luck – had sussed out the first digit in a lengthy, arduous combination. She was more of a puzzle than she was a safe of course. But in the idea of locating the first two pieces to match, you just don’t achieve the same sort of satisfaction. Or so he imagined. Oh hell, he had no idea what he was trying to describe.

But that’s the way it was with love, now wasn’t it? He was unsure, as he had never felt this before. Not True Love at any rate.

He could hear his soul nudging him, “Shut up and talk to her already, you fool!”

Working up the nerve, he met her vacuous gaze while nervously scratching out a hello of sorts. All while his trembling body gave hint that – upon hearing her response – it might very well simply fall apart at each and every seam.

Before she could speak however, the gruff voice of the store manager intruded forcefully from behind, saying, “Sir, I’ve told you before – you frighten the other customers away, when you talk to our mannequins like that.”

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Shannon chose for this week, from Lev Grossman’s “The Magicians.”

Yeah, I just went there.

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39 thoughts on “175 Words Plus A Sentence

  1. t, I have yet to be disappointed by a single post of yours and this is no exception. I loved that you used the safe cracking nuance in terms of judging someone’s mood or personality to get your desired result. And the ending? AWESOME…it actually left me wanting to know what happens when the lights go off at that store ;)

    • Thanks so much – but no worries, one’s bound to pop up sooner or later =)

      Until it does though, I hope you stick around and continue to enjoy!

    • Thanks Tina – rest assured, I’m not thinking I can delve too deeply into “mannequin fiction,” and I’m sure the dead will come back sooner than later =]

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